Monday 23 September 2013

100 word challenge

I walked into the back yard. My hair stood on end. Right infront of me stood a 5 foot tall cup eating my friends.Their legs were in the air.I had to save them.I didn't know what to do though. I knew if I went up to it it would eat me up so that was out of the question. Suddenly an idea popped into my head. I got a rope and tied a loop at the end and twirled it around my head. I threw it round my friends legs and pulled I had saved my friends.



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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 September 2013 at 15:51

    Your story made me want to read more. Maybe next time put a little more detail. But great work. Keep writing more exiting story's.

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  2. Anonymous24 September 2013 at 05:57

    Hello Aimee
    I liked your 100WC story, and and I'm glad you succeeded in saving your friends! I wonder how that huge cup came to be in your garden?! Next time, perhaps you could think of some more ways of starting your sentences to make your writing even more interesting.

    Keep up the good work!
    Gill Ower
    Costa del Sol, Spain

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